One Shot - A Lonely Feeling

I'm really sorry for disappearing for nearly an entire month. I have been busy like I have never been. I did not have the time to read a single book this month. I've been editing my book, I already finished with chapter 1, I will probably post the second chapter tomorrow. Anyway I tried writing a short story for a One Shot Competition.
I learned about it two days before the deadline and I wrote like crazy. It is based on a book from Wattpad called The Boy Who Lost His Sight by Bellaaa_, the book has more than eight million reads. The book is about a girl falling in love with a blind boy.

Here is the link if you want to read her story

http://www.wattpad.com/story/3297489-the-boy-who-lost-his-sight

And here is the link to my One Shot

http://www.wattpad.com/23916163-one-shot-a-lonely-feeling

You probably need to read her story first before reading my one shot.