One Shot - A Lonely Feeling

I'm really sorry for disappearing for nearly an entire month. I have been busy like I have never been. I did not have the time to read a single book this month. I've been editing my book, I already finished with chapter 1, I will probably post the second chapter tomorrow. Anyway I tried writing a short story for a One Shot Competition.
I learned about it two days before the deadline and I wrote like crazy. It is based on a book from Wattpad called The Boy Who Lost His Sight by Bellaaa_, the book has more than eight million reads. The book is about a girl falling in love with a blind boy.

Here is the link if you want to read her story

http://www.wattpad.com/story/3297489-the-boy-who-lost-his-sight

And here is the link to my One Shot

http://www.wattpad.com/23916163-one-shot-a-lonely-feeling

You probably need to read her story first before reading my one shot.

Cursed For Eternity:Chapter 3

I am finally done with editing the third chapter.I know I sti have a lot to improve but I do feel that by the end of this story I would improve so much more.The third chapter focuses on what my character is feeling for her last week.If you like it don't hesistate to vote or comment if you don't I welcome any constructive criticism.if you like the story I will appreciate if you tell your friends about my story but ultimatelly i am just gratefull taht there is someone who is reading my story.here is the link for the thirs chapter.I do hope you enjoy it.

http://www.wattpad.com/22345244-cursed-for-eternity-chapter-3